cmakhk
Rank: Demon Clansman
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Post by cmakhk on Feb 4, 2017 21:21:39 GMT -6
I wrote a book <Poor Princess> and made 1000 copies of it in Hong Kong but not even one book store able to selling books for new writer here. So...lost a lot of money and learn a lesson. Seems like I don't need to pay for selling my book online at Amazon so I will translate my book and sell it on Amazon later. Before that I design to draw three side story for Drangonball to do some promotion. Here is it: (1) Shenron Makes Underwear Again cmakhk.x10.mx/other/dbeng01.html(2) He is the Strongest Human cmakhk.x10.mx/other/dbeng02.html(3) I Have a Younger Sister in a Parallel World cmakhk.x10.mx/other/dbeng03.htmlThanks for the editing of Adam. My book will be edit by him later. |
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Post by Branjita on Feb 6, 2017 11:37:18 GMT -6
 Well that was a bit more adult oriented humor than I expected! You did a really nice job on the artwork! It was fun to read. |
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Post by Alden on Feb 7, 2017 14:21:47 GMT -6
When i first read the title i thought this was a post on some new underwear with a Shenron print as I had recently seen a dragon ball Goku(i think) underwear on another site.  Read the book online and it made me laugh. Nice story and the drawings are really good. Well done. It's sad to read what happened with the 1000 copies thing, I hope things improve and I wish you great success cmakhk. All the very best.  |
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Post by sc4recrow1687 on Feb 7, 2017 19:15:33 GMT -6
That DragonBall comic was hilarious |
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Post by doomprevails88 on Feb 8, 2017 13:16:28 GMT -6
you did a great job with that !!!
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Post by gsaiya on Feb 15, 2017 18:01:30 GMT -6
Turns out, my office is not an appropriate place to read this comic.
Anyways, great job. I'm looking forward to the other stories.
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cmakhk
Rank: Demon Clansman
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Post by cmakhk on Mar 8, 2017 12:45:28 GMT -6
Thanks for reading!
Updated second side story!
This one is too short so I drew one more page for another one.
The next story is the longest one so it will take me several months I guess.
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Post by doomprevails88 on Mar 8, 2017 20:50:41 GMT -6
Can't wait to read it!
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Post by Adrenaline on Mar 8, 2017 21:13:00 GMT -6
Awesome, cmak! I am glad to have helped you with these, and to see you have gotten some decent feedback here too.  There are some missing edits in the 1st side story, but that is okay. The 2nd side story turned out perfect from an edit stand point. I am looking forward to helping you with #3! ***Reminder, I will post your drawings for me in my book thread eventually. |
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Post by Majin Tomato on Mar 8, 2017 21:54:37 GMT -6
Side story two was a lot more fun. The short Gotenks comics was probably my favorite. Super simple concept, but it works so well.
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Post by Branjita on Mar 9, 2017 9:00:54 GMT -6
LOL That strongest human one was awesome! By the way "futons" should be "sleeping bags" I think. A futon is a couch that folds down into an uncomfortable mattress generally, so you don't sleep on the floor.  AND LOLOLOLOL to the short story after it! |
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Post by Majin Tomato on Mar 9, 2017 9:10:31 GMT -6
No, he is correct, it is futon. Japanese futons are small padded mattresses that can be folded up during the day, whereas sleeping bags typically have a blanket built in.
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cmakhk
Rank: Demon Clansman
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Post by cmakhk on Feb 15, 2018 16:50:38 GMT -6
Updated the third side story!
That's the final one.
Thanks for reading!
It took me so long...I have to translate my book now.
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Post by Branjita on Feb 16, 2018 10:47:22 GMT -6
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Post by gokubr on Feb 16, 2018 12:18:07 GMT -6
Really funny!! Nice work
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Post by poposbrother on Mar 1, 2018 8:30:47 GMT -6
Nice touch having Yamcha laying in the same position as when he gets killed by the saibamen lol
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Post by futureztrunks67 on Mar 11, 2018 18:34:16 GMT -6
THAT WAS AMAZING THANK YOU
Really, kudos to you.
I loved when Gotenks asks why he still has the same clothes and The Joke of Super and GT.
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Post by Adrenaline on Mar 28, 2018 21:34:17 GMT -6
Really impressive work on side story #3. That was a big project. I remember editing it lol keep up your talents, cmak.
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Well that was a bit more adult oriented humor than I expected! You did a really nice job on the artwork! It was fun to read.
And then the stuff about "small paper" and "not even half a page" 
